callainlove: (love is... [lf])
callainlove ([personal profile] callainlove) wrote in [community profile] writerslounge 2011-10-21 05:11 am (UTC)

This was brillant. I didn't find it choppy or strange at all. Actually, I find your style of expressing your thoughts evocative and moving.

I especially liked what you had to said in #4 about magic and about grounding a sense of realism into your work.

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