I'd like to echo what owl said with the addition that if you can find someone else to read it aloud (while you listen) that might be useful, too. Especially for picking up dialogue that might not seem to be working, but you can't quite pin down the issue.
Having someone else read it might also make it easier to judge the flow and pacing, catch awkward or redundant phrasing, etc.
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Having someone else read it might also make it easier to judge the flow and pacing, catch awkward or redundant phrasing, etc.
Hope this helps.