callainlove: (love is... [lf])
callainlove ([personal profile] callainlove) wrote in [community profile] writerslounge 2011-10-24 07:19 pm (UTC)

I definitely second, or third really, the reading it aloud advice.

Also, it might help to simply take a breather from thinking about it, rest your mind in some way, and then go back to it later with a fresh perspective.

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