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WORKSHOP: The Road-Train
Sep. 2nd, 2011 05:36 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
analectOkay, I've been very tentative about posting this. There is a backstory to it, but I'd like anyone who's willing to just read and crit - with whatever depth and aggressiveness you like ;) - and I'll put the notes at the bottom.
Title: The Road-Train (A Christmas Fantasy)
Word Count: 5429
Genre: Fantasy, short fiction
( I attempt a reply in an effort to glean the ghost of a useful suggestion but the signal has gone, leaving me with chilly fingers clutching a handful of inert Taiwanese plastic. )
Title: The Road-Train (A Christmas Fantasy)
Word Count: 5429
Genre: Fantasy, short fiction
( I attempt a reply in an effort to glean the ghost of a useful suggestion but the signal has gone, leaving me with chilly fingers clutching a handful of inert Taiwanese plastic. )
