The Writers' Lounge

Hi guys! I'm currently working on a novel that has been a work in progress in my mind for years, but has just started writing itself this past November during NaNoWriMo. I've created a LiveJournal community for my creative work, and I've posted the first scene from my novel there, and I was hoping some of you would be willing to maybe check it out and let me know what you think. It's a closed community, so no one can actually become a member, but you can watch it to keep up with updates, and I have it set up so that anyone can comment. It's at colored_bleu.

Introduction to Colored Blue: "Colored Blue" is kind of my writing pen name. I run a blog about living with mental illnesses, and this novel is something that kind of goes along with it. It's generally a YA novel, I suppose, that's the audience I'm kind of focusing on. It's a dysfunctional-type thing.

Thanks so much in advance to those of you who have time! :)