Date: 2011-09-04 06:24 pm (UTC)
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Oh and one other thing that bothered me. It took too long to find out who the speaker was. Early mention of the other half only referred to a 'partner' and I spent too much time early on wondering if the speaker was a woman or a man. It requires a strong identity to match the strong voice and that needs to happen earlier.
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