Date: 2011-10-02 04:49 pm (UTC)
intothewood: (ManRay)
From: [personal profile] intothewood
Thank you! Yes I bit off kind of a big chunk with the timelines but I hope it'll work. I'm really not sure.

Oh god the name use! So difficult when dealing with characters of one sex. "He said this to him, and he wasn't sure if he knew who he was talking about." Maybe I should mess with the sentences more to see if I can work some of that name calling out of there.

I'm glad you want to see more, that's good news! And I'll definitely share. I still need to post a bit from the third.
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